I crossed my arms
and in resolve
deemed arms and crosses
too dissimilar
to find assemblage.
Author notes
16 words
A contest entry
- brevity by Melissa Gayle.
5500 points, ended November 25, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short yet powerful by BigE.
300 points, ended December 4, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i dont know if it looks like a tank...
but the words have impact....boom.
laney
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tank you
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you're warcome
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bet we could have a blast
that would make the pieces jealous -
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lol....you just have to have the last word....
yes, bet we could.... -
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yup
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shoot! you upstaged me
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well, I don't mind silver when I see what won gold. Congratulations.
lol.
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Thank you. I am honored.
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Well done piece here, congrates on the HM..
Keep up the great works, and pen on poet!
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Wow, this is indeed powerful, and an original way of thinking. Good luck in the contest.
¬Diana
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This was a spectactular write. I absolutely loved what you did with this. The wordplay was genious, nicely done, hit me hard!
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i love the play of this.
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loved the play with crosses. it hit me on the second read. personally, i believe your arms and crosses thing to be genius.
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Thanks
You know. I just realized. This looks like a little tank but when centered looks more like a cross. I'm scared. lol -
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gosh, didn't even notice the tank till now. perhaps, you're the next messiah?
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Lol
No chance of that.
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Damn...
this is good cowboy...
sixteen words...
HOW do you manage these writes of brevity...
it blows my mind!
Blessings! Tammy
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