Dreaming up dreams for tomorrow,
Thinking up thoughts for today,
I wish I could always be with you,
And that you never had to go away.
Looking for sights of beauty,
Hoping to see your great smile,
Each day that I manage to see you,
Is another day I feel worthwhile.
Longing to always be with you,
Hoping one day this will come true,
eagerly awaiting your next arrival,
So that my days may feel less blue.
Author notes
4) How hard it is to be in a long distance relationship.
A contest entry
- OPTIONS [pre-writes allowed] by Ghetto Superstar..
425 points, ended January 17, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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O_o
im not comment another poem.my cp posessed by a digital demon.
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Well this is different but still good.
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ty
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Beautiful
short but sweet and the point is across, flows really good as well
my fave part is :
Longing to always be with you,
Hoping one day this will come true,
eagerly awaiting your next arrival,
So that I may feel less blue.
any-ho, i like this poem
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Hmm... lovely write... very intense and the emotions run deep all through the poem. Really, you are a natural talent. Keep writing. My favorite part:
"Looking for sights of beauty,
Hoping to see your great smile,
Each day that I manage to see you,
Is another day I feel worthwhile"
cheers and thanks for sharing! -
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yw thxs for reading
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coolio, its deep, nice work
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