Challenge
spears the tumultuous
tides, each cap raising Hell,
spewing flecks of
flesh-burning ice,
scarring souls with their
fervent heat;
bashing skulls against
each raging gully,
murdurous waves thrash,
wild, unrestrained;
flesh and blood
excruciatingly split,
each tear flooding
the storm with red;
water's serrated fangs
gnash at the
bloody,mangled,
mutilated forms;
of mankind.
A contest entry
- Just Give Me Something To Read by HerbalGoat.
300 points, ended January 18, 2008, 89 entries
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Comments
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i enjoy the way you gave the sea teeth. when a poet can give inanimate objects personality is when she can/will succeed.
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well
i love the background. the poem is more gore than anything else and i am a gentle soul...lol. anyways, i can see it happening, just like a movie...hmmmm. o well, good write. ♥Kira
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