His delicate fingers trace confessions of centuries
his lips seal secrets of sanctuaries
his breath pipes legends of lost
the Wind his musical Master
guiding him sensitively
in playing the panflute
playing the themes
of Love and Life
playing the
panflute ...
listening ...
playing
the pan-
flute...
.....
myra
...
01.
26.
2002
Author notes
1. Of all musical instruments, the panflute is the most hauntingly beautiful sound of sensitivity ... Delicate, and ancient, and beautifully sad.
Written January 26th, 2002
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'tis a fine write, indeed. Reminds me of my Didgeridoo series. Here's a link for you:
http://allpoetry.com/list/60383-Didgeridoo -
I agree, it is haunting.
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Whoaaa---
This poem appears to have
Sort of petered out
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lovely
absolutely splendid! i love the form. the words trickle down towards the end so soothingly. and your right that is one of the most beautiful instuments. very nice work. peace bw with you
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Wow, this is really great
I don't believe I've ever had the pleasure of hearing a panflute, but I hope to soem day This is a seriously good poem. Thanks for entering.
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Very nice. Good write. Good luck in the contest.
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Sweeeeeet I like this the structuire the diction the whole feel it gives to the reader of sensitivity the whole way it enbraces the page ... I really like this.
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Lovely! I'm sure it's been mentioned a 100 times by now- but the patern is perfect, as well. Great write- good luck!
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Myra, this is a lovely poem. There is something so hauntingly spiritual, like a message from heaven in code that we have not yet broken, in the melodies produced by the pan flute. Your line here "delicate fingers trace confessions of centuries...." somehow pouring time and space eternal into notes.
I love this, Myra.
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Ha! Saving the world, one sleep-deprived slightly insane insomniac at a time... -grins- Quite fun, actually.
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No need to forget ...
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Oh you may play with pan on flutes
with soft symphony and sensual bucolics
but centuries will past and eons too
before I forget the songs love plays for you. -
Thank you, Erin, and thanks for visiting!
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ah, wonderful format! well done! :)
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Thank you, slagman and 1stpoet ... always good to see you ...
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the form....YES a panflute
and the words are as delicate as the music
WSD -
I can hear the melody in this one! A little mystery surrounds this song. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you, Patrick. Your own pen is a panflute ...Play on ...
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yes you got it jusdt right. Isn't it beatiful music? so sad and melodic, much like your lovely tribute here.
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