a nonbeliever happens upon a wet wrap of truth:
be free enough to show infinite beauty
without eye or mouth or arm to judge or change
speak to weather of soul
that lifts up towards chill of outside touch
with unfashionable courage
this is nerve, indeed, raising nipples
though sucked dry
Author notes
prompt: nerve
picture prompt on contest page
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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again with the final ka-boom! line-
man.. i am going to steal wanda's final line and yours.. and make me some purty awesome pottery..
wonderful
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thank you.
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I just told someone else this but I have to say it is true of this poem too: the last stanza/couple of lines is pretty darn good.
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ty
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Again...i applaud your...nerve.
More importantly the talent.
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ty for your comment
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Dammmnnn woman, you do speak your mind!
"this is nerve, indeed, raising nipples
that can not be sucked dry"
Most Eloquently, I must say.
~ Nicky♥
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ty as always
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There are things that make even more impact when spoken with conviction... and nerve... so well done here...PK
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ty
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Oh those last two lines are just gorgeous, Carol - wonderful wonderful poetry. I like a woman with such a nerve... woman enough to raise her nipples!! Loved this one - you are such an amazing poet.
~ Nicolette
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ty nicolette... I did like this one.
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this is nerve, indeed, raising nipples
that can not be sucked dry
This was really good -
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ty
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