Fish-white legs
Poking from beneath blue jeans
Dark t-shirt
Accentuate the whiteness
Oh lo and behold
The white-fish legs
Who mock me with its glow
Author notes
25 words
A contest entry
- brevity by Melissa Gayle.
5500 points, ended November 25, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting, sometimes we don't look to ourselves to find such poetry and when we do we can see ourselves differently. Well done.
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hehehehe nice use of word play and i think that the shortness of it made you think about it more
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LOL! my friend, you continue to astonish me. I LURV UR USE OF VOCABULARY!!
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This one is very interesting. I love the shortness of it!
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