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Lyndon's Gift - a senyru

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 ;)

 

streams of sunshined rain

flow omnipresent trickles

gracing his dear friends

 

;) 

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Happy birthday dear friend - and friend is what you are even if we live oceans apart. Your love and kindness trickle all the way to CT.

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  • Lyndon gold member
    November 26, 2007
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    This is beautiful

    Joanne. I am humbled.
    Lots of love,
    Ron.


  • Anna Emkah
    November 17, 2007

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    This is a tribute to all your friends. You have used nice words in this senryu (I think that's the right word) to make clear how you want to grace them: with sunshined rain of omnipresent trickles. Lovely.
    Anna.