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This is where it will end -BRONZE



Molten eyes

that burn,

surrounded in age

and

soft crinkled

skin.


The wiser

always whispers

my name

with a rasping voice

and parched lips.


Faded skin

and liquid irises.













Author notes

3. "Aging amber"

Twenty-nine words.



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  • Virgoan
    November 19, 2007

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    I like the words and imagery here...very crisp.

    Wonderful write.

    Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

    VIRGOAN


  • going nowhere
    November 17, 2007

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    i love your style of writing... each word has a purpose and meaning. great job on this one. good luck in the contest.