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Life Changing Babies

When your baby's born,
Your life will never be the same.
Priorities won't be torn.
Number one now has a name.

Right away you'd give your life
To stop them feeling pain
Like a glow shared with your wife,
The special bond you gain.

I'm not saying it's a piece of cake,
When he just won't go to sleep.
But it's the easiest of rough to take
For the benefits you reap.

To say a glow is slightly wrong
For such indescribable joy.
An emotion so strong that I nearly fainted,
The first time I saw my wee boy.

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  • cgirl0410 silver member
    November 18, 2007

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    Very nice piece. Congrats! I can tell from this piece that you are very excited and happy. Great write. - cgirl0410


  • sky black
    November 17, 2007

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    :D

    congratulations on your baby!
    this is such a joy filled poem and it flows with pride and joy.
    such a loving piece, well written.
    sky xxx

    p.s- best of luck with the sleepless nights


  • transcendental baby gold member
    November 17, 2007

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    Oh congratulations! Yes, there is nothing that's going to change your life more than a baby, but it's a good change

    Glad to have you back!