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The Lion and the Firefly

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Once the King of the Stars manifested himself as a lion. The Queen of Fairies came by manifested as a firefly, and landed on his nose. She said: “So, Lion, tell me, do not lie: what do you see in this firefly?”   

 

“Too small for dinner, so I see a firefly.” The cross-eyed lion teased the Queen of Fairies who he’d rightly seen.

 

 “Oh?” She smiled back knowingly. “So, Lion, let's we play, shall we? Be my dream plane in the dark. You can let me be your spark.” 

 

 “Okay. What do I have to do?”

 

 “Open one eye, only one, and trust me, for this will be fun. See a shimmer on your one closed lid? It is me, of course! And so I bid you: speak to me. Speak, roar and howl to this shimmer in a low, lion growl.”

 

In his most ferocious growl, the lion said: “Welcome, gatekeeper to the unknown. Thanks for opening eternity for me.”

 

“Now, which port do you want most to see? Tell me Lion mine, shall it be  to paradise … or the wise of eyes?”

 

“You tell me. It is the gatekeeper who is wise in such matters, not the traveler.”

 

“Oh, no! The traveler does take the leap. I only have the gates to keep. You choose your gate with your own voice. The gatekeeper is slave to the choice.”

 

“Don’t I have a path given to me by my ancestors? Am I not a continuation of their path?”

 

“It’s but illusion, ‘tis not true. Your path is individualized, you are the only one to walk it, see? We are not universal, we are unique, we can’t apply rules to the soul, we would be fools. We are all sparks of wondrous star rain. Do not be misled, my friend, by roots, for they are only roots, and of no use without the envisioned fruit! So, Lion of masterful stance, it’s time for you to take a chance. You are about to roam the meadows of birth. You must decide your path from this Earth.”

 

“Hmmm.” The lion growled very seriously. He pondered deeply, then looked at the firefly and said in a voice that was in no way serious: “Then I shall skip!” and he began to skip across the field, as the firefly laughed and flitted around his face.

 

“Sing then, Lion. Sing then the words evasive, wonderfully absurd. Sing to me, wondrous Lion of Voice. Sing to the beat of your gate’s choice.”

 

The lion sang merrily as he skipped across the plains:

 

Two paths I’m given to traverse

To knowledge or to paradise

To heart’s bliss or to wisdom’s purse

Two paths I’m given to traverse

They certainly are quite diverse

Oh, shimmer shining in my eyes

Two paths I’m given to traverse

To knowledge or to paradise

 

To paradise I’d gladly skip

To wisdom, humbly jump and hop

Won’t either be a worthwhile trip?

To paradise I’d gladly skip

For wisdom do a double flip

Are both illusions, should I stop?

To paradise I’d gladly skip

To wisdom, humbly jump and hop

 

Oh, Queen of Fairies, see my eye

is winking as you shimmer near

It’s gone to paradise to fly

Oh, Queen of Fairies, see my eye

is not watching as you buzz by

but sheds another blissful tear

Oh, Queen of Fairies, see my eye

Is winking as you shimmer near

 

So notice, little firefly

The other eye observes your light

It’s watching as it wonders, why

So notice, little firefly

It also studies ground and sky

To put the puzzle picture right

So notice, little firefly

The other eye observes your light

 

To skip and jump and hop I go

One can traverse both paths, you see

I’ll blissfully be in the know

To skip and jump and hop I go

To slip through both gates to and fro

As each eye chooses sep’rately

To skip and jump and hop I go

One can traverse both paths, you see

 

“Ha ha ha ha ha. You ARE so funny spiritual being of Lion Hearts, Lord of Stars. Overly so! I hear those refrains, I do, you know. Clever Lion. There is but one King of the Stars and he is fun.” She lovingly tapped his nose. “You’re it! Nitwit!” and they spent half the night chasing around the plains, knowing that wisdom comes from Love and Love brings wisdom and that Heaven starts with a spark.

Author notes

“I have slaved long and hard to produce something of real value that I know will live long after I am buried with the greats. However DP Robertson & Desiree Darkk has the right to comment on this masterpiece of mine anyway they see fit, in any manner of speech they see fit. This may include disparaging phrases, unflattering comments and straight out “what the fuck is this steaming mound of horse shit” type abuse. DP Robertson & Desiree Darkk will be constructive where possible but sometimes, well, if my poem, in their esteem opinion, sucks the big one they can let me know bluntly or otherwise. Should I receive one of these critical onslaughts because maybe Des or David had a long day or mine was unlucky enough to be the one that broke their spirit, I WAIVE MY RIGHT TO COMPLAIN TO THE MODERATORS OR OWNER OF AP, TICKET THEM IN ANYWAY OR TRY AND GET THE VINDICTIVE PRICKS BANNED…no matter how shat off I am with their response to my beloved ode.”


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  • Blackendeyes
    June 13
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    I don’t know what it is but I like it when I see it!¡ well written

  • Cat10
    May 19

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    thank you for entering, sorry it took so long to comment! this is a wonderful and amamzing story! you did a great job! good luck!
  • I started reading this and my immediate reaction was, “what the fuck is this bollocks?” But mercifully that passed after a while. Its story combined with the internal rhyme of the narrative creates effectively a children’s story with universal themes. I could see something like this being illustrated. That is not to say it wouldn’t benefit from a slightly tighter meter and a firmer hand in the editing, the basic concept of it actually works if you work on that level of simple truth and animated story. In short it is good wisdom wrapped in a lovely structure- not my cup of poetry tea mind you but I could imagine this having broad appeal, especially as I said, should it be illustrated.

    Your review of Parody of Spirit by Amera

    This poem deserved the Gold in the contest it was in, in my humble opinion. The contest holder gave you a poem that is almost impossible to write and a topic that was even harder for the form. Then they have the audacity to say it is not what they were looking for. Instead of admitting they did something silly and compensate, they asked you to write an additional, more traditional poem so they would know how to judge it better. This was a huge faux pas in my opinion. This is brilliantly written, considering the limitations of a form that was a hoax to begin with, and since the judge did not know this, their contest eded up a hoax as well. Just wanted to get that out of my system. This deserves the gold. No doubt about it.

    My review.

    It is a little clichéd for my liking and the unnecessarily restricting structure of the piece is more annoying than clever. However that said, I can still appreciate it without getting over excited by it. But one has to acknowledge that if this was the poetry challenge of the contest that this was entered into, then the writer has made a fair fist of it.

    This is well written, considering the limitations of a form

    On the other hand one could also say that a person should have won the Olympic gold had they not been manacled to a ball and chain whist staggering down the track.

    These were good entries. The review could have been a little more focused upon poem rather than crackpot judges but overall, good work. You have a very strong philosophy running through your work which is both refreshing and highly directional. It keeps your pieces pointed and from the aspect of readership, a positive attribute to have as a writer.

  • myrataal silver member
    April 5

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    It reads smoothly and it truly is a Paradise Poem ...

    about love and about healing. Often Love is a spark in a dark night, don't you think?
    Now you do not need your Author's note anymore.

    Love
    Always Myra
  • I really enjoyed your words and rhyme in this poem. To me its a good bed time story. lol
    Keep on writing.
    Loves


  • Meroza gold member
    March 18

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    This one is so cute! And yet again, perfectly placed words. I really did like thos story and the meaning in it was good too.

    Your an amazing writer I must say

  • wow.... amazing. one of the best things i have ever read, truly... amazing...

  • That was great. I really enjoyed the use of the lion and firefly that was clever. Thanks so much for entering and good luck.
  • Blue Rew
    January 27

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    This is just great! I read it to my children and they seemed to absorb the message here too. Wonderful to
    have these words to enjoy first thing in the morning.
    Blue


  • JinSays
    January 17

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    “You’re it! Nitwit!”

    Wonderful story! Charming. Funny. Sweet, and adorable..
    You have a delightful sense of humor.
    Humor is good.
    My little girls would love this poem, can I share it with them?

    Jin


  • malkinpuss gold member
    December 3, 2007

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    Delightful

    A wondrously delightful tale that would always delight the heart of a child or those of us who delight in savouring our childish hearts. A must read for all!


  • Luna Tique Fringe gold member
    November 19, 2007
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    I noticed on the way out the door that this was a collaboration...so I must include Myra...you are a brave woman to have taken on this task, with Mr. Man...you've done very well together. Maybe there will be more

  • Luna Tique Fringe gold member
    November 19, 2007

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    wow...you amaze me, over an over again. This is brilliant and beyond...I'm going to ruminate a little over this one, my dear.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    WOnderfully penned. I loved this and the story behind it. Amera is right your amazing in your work. Great job and best wishes

    Tory


  • Amera gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    You are a born story teller and the song is delightful. Your magical imagery simply flows from line to line releasing a fantasy and at the same time giving access to the inner you.

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      November 18, 2007
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      Pssst Tory just saying hi and reading a great piece. Wonderful isnt it? I love a great story and song and i got them both here.
      Much love to you
      Tory

  • indomitable
    November 18, 2007

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    wow. lol, this story just kept getting better, i love every little thing about it. how the lion closed one eye to see what he already saw differently. what a neat idea, and kind of profound when i think about it. i love how you made the seriousness of a choice between two seemingly important things lighthearted. lol, no small feat with me, choices make me anxious. this was great though, going in my bookmarks. thanks.


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    I think you are a genius,
    but what's new? Always
    I have known you to be
    nothing short of brilliant...

    you shine.

    Love, Lane

  • Arzab
    November 17, 2007

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    I love this. Great dilaogue in this piece and it seemed to have a cheerful feeling to it, as well. Good luck in the contest.

  • myrataal silver member
    November 17, 2007
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