I watch her every afternoon when she comes home,
her gorgeous body wrapped in red silk.
She sets down her purse on the night stand,
slowly she walks over to the window and opens the blinds.
One by one she pulls at the buttons on her dress,
slowly she drops it to the bedroom floor.
My heart starts to pound instantly as I sit here,
across the street in my own bedroom.
She pulls the ribbons from her long blonde hair,
and steps out and away from her dress.
So beautiful like a goddess in the night,
she leaves me breathless and wanting more.
She takes a fresh rose from the vase on her table,
then carefully lies down on her back.
She teases herself by running it up and down her body,
her freshly shaven mound starts to drip down onto the bed.
I feel a stirring sensation deep within my body,
just watching her sends an erotic vibe throughout me.
She rolls over to the dresser on her left,
and starts to sort through an assortment of toys.
She pulls out a pink vibrator, turns it on, and inserts it.
I can almost hear her squirm as I see her lips move.
Over and over again she plunges it deep into her mound,
she cooes and screams as her body starts to tremble.
She cums all over it and brings it to her breasts,
the rubber cock begins to drip all over her.
Rubbing it all over her body as she squeezes her breasts.
She places the vibrator in her mouth and sucks the remaining juices.
Sated, she sits up and throws her long blonde hair behind her.
She looks out the window but, she can't see me.
She stands naked before me still dripping wet,
she watches the birds fly through the city.
I muster the courage and walk over to the sliding door,
she sees me as I blow her a kiss and smile.
She points her finger at me and motions me to come over.
Without hesitation, I slip on my jeans and run out the door.
At last, the erotic encounter I have been waiting for.
I can feel my cock twitch as I run down the stairs and into the city.
As I arrive I see a note that reads "Room 69 For Love"
I make my way over there and knock on the door.
She answers it still naked from head to toe.
I pick her up and throw her gorgeous body onto the bed.
She asks me how long I have been watching her.
Ignoring her question, I start to thrust into her.
She looks deep into my eyes and tells me,
"I have seen you so many times across the street,
even in darkness you still can be seen."
Red faced, I tell her about my fantasies.
How every night I have waited for this moment.
I know now that she was teasing me all along,
as I sat watching, admiring, and lusting for her
from my window across the street.
Author notes
Option #1
A contest entry
- 69 by Ravenblood.
300 points, ended November 18, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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SMOKIN!!
HELLO DEAR POETRY FRIEND,
This is really... really... realistic and SO EROTIC,I could see what you were seeing as the visuals you have woven into this write are awesome and well written.Your words are tantalizing,and highly erotic...very naughty... and very nice!!
You have penned great emotion into this write,with rich detail, one can really sense your longing and passion, well-done!!
My friend, this is an amazing poem with visionary power...Erotic??... Sensual??... oh yeah!!
*reaching for some ice cubes to chew on*
Many blessings to you,
your friend in poetry.
~Angel~
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Quite the sexy, seductive little piece here
Whooo! Makes me wish my honey were home from work...ahem
Wishing you the best of luck in the contest! -
The imagery is great and it went perfectly with the picture. This has the sensuality I asked for, yet it seemed like a lengthy story. I stilled enjoyed it and thank you for your entry
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its very good, very well described
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Hi ya, I haven't read this poem yet, i will when the contest closes. but could you please put your name in the authors notes, it was a rule of the contest. thank you ..
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I just wanted to tell you that I added my author's name to my poem as you asked. Thanks a lot, I appreciate it!
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Hot!!!
Very nice piece. I wrote one a long time ago on this picture. You got me beat!LOL!
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