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[ My heart beats in New Zealand ]

My heart beats in New Zealand
I hope you know that by now
...As I read your e-mail, all I could do is think wow...

Pain and memories
Is all that remain
As I do remember the fun with we did
While niether of us didn't suffer any pain.

The memories hold me
In the time of sorrow
Texting all night
But not hearing from you tomorrow

Here is the curse that constantly remains
No matter how much I may say it
I don't know if it's what you will believe

Ever since a week ago
You were gone
And there I lay
...unconscious...wandering...

You've been back for about a week ago
How could you know that you ever met me
And you don't even know

I hope your Mom is okay
And that together we will grow
Closer and closer
Until the end

Our dying day
Where no one can comprehend

I know its not the best, how can i improve?

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