Bubble!
Popping giggle.
Enchanted playing time
smiling within a child's heart.
Timeless pleasure floats upon summer breeze.
Orb of rainbow magic gliding
freely upon the wind.
Joyful blowing
bubble.
Author notes
Prompt:
1. "Bubbles breathing"
29 Words
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF by Virgoan.
400 points, ended November 19, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent
What a creative and well done rictameter. Best of luck in the contest.
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penman
Thank you. I am so pleased you found pleasure in this piece. Thank you.
~Pamela 
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Wow nice rictameter. Beautiful descriptions of a bubble and its many fun attributes. The grandkids love playing with the bubbles. Thanks for sharing your images.
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Beautiful!!
This reminds me so much of summer with my kids. They love to blow bubbles. I am going to have to write a rictameter. I've never written one. I'd like to try a septolet, as well as a cinquain.
Knight70
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Nice way in interpreting the prompt. I like the form and the contemporary words used.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
VIRGOAN
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bubbles are AMAZING!!!! sooooo much fun! and so is this poem, great job, it truly was a pleasure to read! =)
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i so love bubbles!
one of my favorite things as a child, thanks for the memories!
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'popping giggle' what great two words...
and the picture of 'Orb of rainbow magic gliding
freely upon the wind' ... makes me smile. i was just blowing bubbles with a little 4 year old boy, and to see the joy on his face as the bubbles floated and popped was SO incredible. great rictamenter!
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