I love you more than words can express
so I won't even try
instead I'll show you with my life
and everything that I am
I'll let my actions show my love
A contest entry
- I LOVE YOU by Page Deleted..
600 points, ended November 19, 2007, 16 entries
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Your inner voice is singing...
...instead I'll show you with my life.
Indeed it is the truest gift of love one can give. Worth more than any word.
Beautifully stated. A perfect case of when less is oh so much much more. Excellent job Poet! ~Pamela
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oh, i love this poem!!! short and sweet.
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beautiful
i really love the line
"I'll let my actions show my love" -
This was a nice poem... great pleasure reading those lovely 5 lines! And its far better if you could show someone you love them than just say it! Actions speak louder than eords!
best of luck in the contest!
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just beautiful, kev, as usual... you stellar poet!
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Great poem! Thanks for entering.
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very true actions speak louder than words. good luck in the contest.
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