What we have
Is passionate love
Love that comes
From deep within
My heart for you
Cherishing every moment
Spent with you
Is like a day
Spent in heaven
Forever I love you
Always till the end
A contest entry
- I LOVE YOU by Page Deleted..
600 points, ended November 19, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My Contest! by lemonhead.
520 points, ended January 12, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think. Be honest!
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You honestly know how to write about love, don't let anyone tell you differently. Good Luck in the contest.
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Warm and tender..a very loving piece my fellow poet. I truly enjoyed this wonderful piece. There is much talent here and you must have alot of great inspiration as well.
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This was a very sweet poem! ans it was a great pleasure to read it! the words meant ever so much
and the tittle suited this piece so well! best of luck in the contest! 
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great poem, it was a pleasure to read. good luck in the contest! =)
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wow now that looks alot better and you can focus on the poem more... very pretty background....
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it's not for me to say but i find one thing wrong here... your words and your background are hard to read in some parts of your work here. but your poem is nice and i liked it but i had to highlight it to read it and i thought that you might want to know...... but great job and good luck in the contest!!!!
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Wow, you write that pretty fast! I enjoyed this, thanks for entering.
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