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Fairyland

Pacing the house like a wandering soul,
I can't forget all the lies that I've told.

Drifting away on these hollow beds of ice,
I want to make all of it just go away right now.

~*~*~*~

And if I can't, then on my knees, I'm begging for release,
From the world of my horrors please make me feel just free.

I don't know who I am anymore so please help me,
Help me find my way along to our fairyland.

~*~*~*~

Please don't leave me alone 'cause I can't stand the cold,
Forever we said every day so help me to believe.

I cross my heart and I wait for you to come,
Please don't leave me alone 'cause I'm no longer here.

Author notes

Well.. This is a song, funnily enough. I wrote it while i was listening to "You are the moon" by The Hush Sound... Thats what music I've been singing along to it, and why it doesn't really look like other lyrics.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g0byKA-Iux0


Hope you like... and It's also for my BandAid.

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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    November 18, 2007

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    I knew as soon as you said "our fairyland".

     

    I never realised it'd be this hard to comment on anything you wrote.

     

    I love you. We'll both be free soon enough hun. It just may not seem like soon enough.

     

    ♥♥♥

    Bandaid.


  • zeltria
    November 17, 2007

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    I'm not familiar with the song, but I think this one is very deep and intense. I'm sure it's something that we all feel from time to time when all alone in an empty house. Makes you think about your life from a different perspective. I like it!


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger gold member
    November 17, 2007

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    Interesting

    Nowe I had to to chuckle at the ide aof you singing nothing perosnal sis but as I read your comments and your reply judgin by your replies you fdon't sing very well and well it cracks me up because I suck worse I bet any ways this is a very sweetly well penned poem and I liked it. its got good flow and thrythm to it and the song is not half bad,. kepe up the good work sis

    Bro


  • LadyLullaby gold member
    November 17, 2007

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    Sweet but haunting, Claire.

    And I hope everything is alright over there and don't just say 'ok'.

    love ya.


    • Ravenblood
      November 17, 2007
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      Mmmmk.. there i didnt say ok. nd for the moment everything is alright. i love you,.

  • Lady Australis silver member
    November 17, 2007
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    this is awsome sweetheart
    i wanna hear u sing again hehe
    i luffles yu baby

    • Ravenblood
      November 17, 2007
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      Lol huns. i cant sing! very well at least. luffles you too
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