The Wind Surrounded me
As I stood in the grass
Watching the leaves play
The colors of death intertwined
With the life still left
The wind blew harsher
Rushing my hair past my face
My cheeks flush,but cold
The warmth of life inside
The Coldness of death out
Almost the same for the leaves
Holding on tightly,grasping
Trying to survive knowing
The inevitable as the wind
Blows colder and harsher
The Winter will come
And all the beautiful colors
That Life is Full of
The Vibrant tapestry of breath
Will fade away...blowing
In the Immortal Wind.
Author notes
QUOTE:
"The wind is blowing the colors of life away"
also by Justin Maylone
A contest entry
- You Thought We'd Be Fine by doyouloveit.
485 points, ended November 20, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - no title by lee-sharp.
1500 points, ended January 15, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What's your first impresion?
Comments
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i really don't know what to say accept this is beautiful so full of emotions about the truths of life thank you for sharing
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Your welcome! Thanks for honorable mention!
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Oh deep and very powerful here, it's like slowly turning into black and white, gray color too, with every pain and thoughts, feelings....
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^___^
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This was DEEP. I honestly think it's the deepest piece I have ever read from you. Well done sweetie, and good luck in the contest.
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Thank you Tarja!
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Dark natural piece here. Good luck.
Thanks for your comment.
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Thanks
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Like it!
That Life is Full of
The Vibrant tapestry of breath
Will fade away...blowing
In the Immortal Wind.
Wonderful lines penned...All the best!
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even our own limbs tremble near our fall, as our life leaves on the bitter winds of fates unknown direction wow, profound bev...
aren't you still too young to be pondering the passing of your days...lol..Artis
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Thank you as always Artis.
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