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A Summer Walk

pink pointe pirouettes,
precious peach printed
petticoat properly pruned,
plum pleasures,
present problems purse
parched petals. 

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16 words, prompt was 'pirouetting petals'

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  • Virgoan
    November 19, 2007
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    Interesting take on the prompt.

    Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

    VIRGOAN