Shedding their weight from mother tree
Pink petals of cherry tumble free
The air whisks them into a graceful dance
Each giving their fellows room to enhance
A ballet of intricate design
The wind driving them each in time
Softly landing from the winds flow
Covering the ground as a blanket of snow
In a list
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A contest entry
- PIF by Virgoan.
400 points, ended November 19, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cherry Blossom Sweetness by Rinoasis.
450 points, ended March 13, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
On the tip of your tongue, and in front of your eyes... What is it?
Comments
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Soft and serene
I like the flow, rhythmn, and imagery of this piece. Very nicely done.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
VIRGOAN
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Gahh this was bee-you-tee-full! I loves it. It's graceful and i love the idea of "snowing petals" never thought of that before. very original indeed homie! Good luck in that contest, you're gonna get GOLD for sure this was amazing.
* 3 applauds* grr i never have any left lol -
beautiful....delicious...i love it
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delightful
i love what you have penned here so full of life good luck in the contest my dear wonderful
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