saw in eyes
the absent eye,
bed more soft,
sheet gained fragrance of
jasmine.
went to bigger plank
in most grand shipwreck,
impetuous, irresponsible truthfulness,
fraud of ideas...
floating
towards beach,
to sail up
in search of soul...
incredible,
missed!
a longing
never finishes,
when imprisoned soul
blister of rarefied air,
in an eternal one to pant...
saw in zephyr,
the black face
of apathy,
like road of mountain range,
like being without skin in sun,
...halve it...
Author notes
Prompt: 1. "Bubbles breathing"
78 words
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A contest entry
- PIF by Virgoan.
400 points, ended November 19, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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There is something flavorful in this piece. Its brokenness is effective with thoughts that enthralls my senses.
Well done.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
VIRGOAN
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