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**Icicle Irony**
Inky as coal in the night Strong and bold as a tree Icy stalactites of frozen glass. Shiny as diamonds in the day Weak and brittle as a rose Rippling pools of translucent prisms. With the sun, it melts away. Drip-Drop. . . . .Drip-Drop With the moon, it freezes again. Drip. . . . .Drip http://allpoetry.com/poem/3615852 © Cara L. Greenlee, All rights reserved Nov 16 9:58 PM 2007
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A contest entry
- PIF Prompt by penman.
525 points, ended November 18, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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I like this
Very good write and it brings into mind the fragile state of our world today
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You Got Some talent Girl
Once again, beautiful imagery with so few words yet speaking volumes. When I write they usually end up 70-100 lines...to say what I want...lol. You look at the world so beautifully...
Evan
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Good luck with this lovely write full of magical wonder.xxx
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FITS THE PHOTOGRAPH TO A T!
GOOD LUCK in this contest with this short and sweet piece that painted a fine image of the photograph that was presented with it - very beautifully. The two lines below - say it all!
Drip-Drop in the sun, melting away in the day.
Drip-Drop in the moon, freezing again in the night
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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This is great and the picture is so good. I use to sneak outside and eat these when I was a kid. Funny, if you tried that now, you'd die or something worse. lol
Love ya,Cathy
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