I like brevity in ladies lingerie,
presidential speeches
and do-it-yourself assemblies.
Of course in the end,
you usually wind
up getting screwed
long and hard
but brevity rocks.
Author notes
word count -30
A contest entry
- brevity by Melissa Gayle.
5500 points, ended November 25, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the lightness in this piece.
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Ok, this was just too damn funny for me to come up with some great "tell me what you think" remark. President and speeches $1000, ladies lingerie $45 with a do-it-yourself assembled object $15, getting screwd long and hard-priceless LMAO
Jen -
ps........but then watching the pres's speech in lingerie just might be the humor needed here!
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hmmm i don't know but seems to me that watching presidential speeches in ladies lingerie just might be the long and short of it all at once. Unless the parade of the lingerie in front of the screen is enough to cause the short of his speech thus creating a muuuuuuuuuch longer period of brevity.
~;~ fp
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LOL
I love waiting to see what you will write next. Awesome job sweetie.
Good luck in the contest.
Cathy
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it does, doesn't it?
lol.
At least till morning.
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Great perspective write. Ain't it the truth though
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