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At peace

The breeze in my hair,
the sweet smell of the air.
The sounds of the waves,
how the ocean behaves.

Author notes

Another attempt at a poem in so few words. The ocean is one of the places where I feel the troubles of my life wash away with the waves.

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  • Virgoan silver member
    December 3, 2007

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    i like breeze in this piece. the moment etch in this is awesome.

    lovely imagery.

    thanks for sharing.

    virgoan


  • Malabu
    November 16, 2007

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    guess one could ponder seeping in the sand...salt air with a brisk breeze...a sail vessel in the distance...carries my thoughts away....lovely write...
    Mal