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Interest

I love him so
He does not return
What I feel for him

He thinks little of me
While I think of him
As a high prince
Sitting on his throne

He doesn't know I
Am here,
To him I am invisible
But I see him
Even when he's not here

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 28, 2007

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    Good write here

    Yes in life so many people feel such love for others and they never know .Its sad we hold so much inside from others for fear they wont feel the same .And in never letting them know we steal love from our ownself