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Chinese whispers

Dark patterns
worn
with a devilish drone
seeping from habitual lips

tripping over every verse I spill.

Disengaged tongue
vibrating beneath mistrust
whisper weep
on rotting slate.

Cracked voice
astrologically unkempt

my sign reveals  ~ everything!

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  • EvilKate
    November 17, 2007
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  • Suzanne Dia
    November 16, 2007

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    I really like the language here a lot. The secret, well it hurts as I'm reading it ..if that makes any sense at all. I like this.

    Thanks for entering.