Wall flower, Wall flower
I see you've grown
You're getting much taller
This I know
Wall flower, Wall flower
Please don't weep
Love and affection
Is that what you seek
Wall flower, Wall flower
So majestic and tall
Why is it
That you're acting so small
Wall flower, Wall flower
I love your new dress
Í'm stuck wondering
Who you're trying to impress
Wall flower, Wall flower
The time has moved on
It seems to me
Your happiness is gone
Wall flower, Wall flower
You're fading away
I missed my chance
To say all I needed to say
Wall flower, Wall flower
No longer standing tall
I'm sorry I never said
I love you at all
Wall flower, Wall flower
Did you take the sun too
I only wish
I paid more attention to you
Author notes
I'm sure we've all felt like a wall flower at times!!
A contest entry
- MAKE ME FEEL by Cena-of-Destiny.
2750 points, ended October 17, 2008, 45 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please comment truthfully, constructive critiscism is what i need...i want to move on with my poetry so be hard!!!
Comments
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I liked both poems!This one I have to say,is more of a downer then the other!Great!
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wow, this is really great but you stretch the rhyming sometimes, check the rhythm. i really like it. the rep made me really think and the mess. is really put great. good luck in my contest!
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