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Agony

Bar princess
accepts his tale,
motel dream,
turning nightmare
discovering
she's a he
with badge,
who prefers
guys!

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  • Judith Chandler
    November 18, 2007

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    oh dear

    Or maybe he discovered some unexpected proclivities. We all seem to be into this gender bender stuff now but it made your little tale interesting and enjoyable.


  • going nowhere
    November 16, 2007
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    i'll be brief and say... oh my!

    • penman gold member
      November 17, 2007
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment.