I'll care for you when
Peaceful chaos envelops
And my heart is melted ice
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To someone...Hhehe I love being coy...
Written October 21st, 2003
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oooh mysterious write here!! lol..coy is definitely the word, powerful too - good job Scarlett
Much love to you
~*blue*~
xxx
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ahhhhhhhh Marie....How did you get on my name???!!!
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Hey
Ana well thats will never happen cause your heart is solid ice.
NAH im justing joking, your a great friend and great poem writer.
Luv you -
Scarlett
Very powerful!!!!!!!!!
I do belive Reenie is right, it's a senryu , awesome one at that
Karen
p.s. I have that picture you have on your page, now
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A loud and clear message
I do believe this would be called a Senryu though <---not quite sure of the spelling. A Haiku usually is only about nature and a Senryu is personal. You might want to look that up . Regardless , like you said....it was coy too and I enjoyed the big message that had so few words
Reenie
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that is good i remember u saying it earlier today i wonder who it is to lol i wont tell promise
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Wow, great ku. Yup, it certainly is coy.
Like sending a wink over the shoulder..lol.
Daoine
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