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Her voice
enthralls nature's
bearing flares of courage
that burns awareness
across the land
of Gods and promises.
Paying tribute:
"Respecting life
and its form".
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Author notes
Written November 16, 2007
Inspired by:
"Princess Mononoke" meaning "Spirit of things"
I gave a brief moment of how she fought for life, balance and equality.
A contest entry
- #2 The Legacy of Hayao Miyazaki by ModernXTimes.
625 points, ended November 26, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Result Of Boredom: A "Whatever" Contest by Exodus.
525 points, ended January 25, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is beautiful! I loved that movie! Grats on your HM!
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I really liked it. There's nothing else I could really say about it. I always like to critique a poem when I read it, but I really can't do that here. It's just a really good poem, and it's just flawless in every aspect. You were able to capture the spirit of princess mononoke in just a few short lines. That's the magic of it. It's not anything fancy, but it's just great in its brevity. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
Sincerely yours and forever more,
ModernXTimes
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