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...

lying under the lies
continue to breathe
waiting for ...
the one i want
...
leaving it as it is
keeping this secret

within...

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  • PureRomance
    November 16, 2007

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    This is a very good poem. I look forward to reading more from you when I get the chance. Keep up the excellent work and keep that ink flowing. Good luck to you and this poem in the contest. God bless you in all you do and write.