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Serenity Comes In The Aftermath!

You antagonize me and bring me down
You make me drown in my own tears
Sometimes we're perfectly fine,
But at other times you re-surface all my fears

You're the queen when it comes to insults
You can cut so deep without a word
All you have to do is give me that look,
And I burst into tears, it's so absurd.

I feel so worthless and alone.
Yet I know I don't deserve this...
But after each fight, all I can think of
Is feeling the blade's deadly kiss.

Just to feel it rip into me
To just see a tiny crimson bubble leak out
Would finally instill some quiet peace in my head
A chance for serenity uninterrupted by screams or a shout.

Author notes

Argh. I can't stand her....

Does it ever get better?

Thoughts? Comments? Puhlease?

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  • she still smiles x gold member
    November 17, 2007

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    awwww

    this poem is beautiful and sosoSO powerful. stay strong girl! i knowww you can do it. don't even listen to what other people have to say...obviously, if they are mean to you and say things that hurt you, they aren't worth your time. you're a great person, dont forget that!! forget about people who try to take away your happiness. keep smilin!

    <3


  • hopelessly-broken
    November 17, 2007

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    ohhhh sweetie,
    things will get better i promice you! just hang in there and stay strong... dont fall for the urges of the blade, but that like was my fave bit
    "But after each fight, all I can think of
    Is feeling the blade's deadly kiss."

    i like you choice of words throughout it too.

    keep writting, you do it so well, your so talented hun. take care of yourself
    love always HB
    xoxoxoxoxo