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A Song To The Sun

Here I come to find myself, to catch the tide,
looking for a peace at the end of the line.
Sometimes I can’t help myself, my fevers high,
I’m all at sea and so unwise.
I’m so afraid I’ll lose your love, as time goes by,
but courage is a fire and a beacon that’s so bright.
The sunset built a memory, of our love sign,
and all at sea, we come alive.
Will I wash away, turning like a stone?
I need a place, where I belong.
Call a setting sun to throw me down a rope
and take me to a place, a place called home.
I close my eyes, I know you’re there, love of mine,
Standing on the shore in a world I designed.
The sunset fires a lonely flare into the sky,
and all at sea, we say goodbye.
Will I wash away, turning like a stone?
I need a place, where I belong.
Call a setting sun to throw me down a rope
and take me to a place, a place called home.
Looking for a place called home

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  • tinytoes
    November 16, 2007

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    WOW! This poem speaks to me so clearly of a love not wholly yours, but still a deep, true love that is unattainable, perhaps they belong to another. Just my interpretation, really moving write. Thank you for sharing. Julie.