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heart of gold

You're the dew
on the grass
in the mornin' time...

The stars
that blanket
the night sky.

You're the air
that I breathe
every day...


The one that
always knows
those perfect words to say.

The one
that dries my tears
when I'm sad...

The only one
who forgives me
when everyone's mad.

You're the sun
during winter
when it's cold...

The one
who's always there
the one with a heart of gold.

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  • Pleasantly Insane
    April 28, 2008

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    Yay!!

    Lol. I like it. It's kind of something I know that I could never write myself. Haha. I can't compare that well in my poems like that. Thanl you for entering and good luck.


  • Sir Love Coffin
    November 16, 2007
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    Well Writen

    You did a very good job on your poem. A very good insight of the nature. Keep up great poetry.