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In the damp

Its a cold
Year for
Sleeping

In
Graves

Autumn
Leaves
Mold

In the damp

Visitors
Don't
Come
Anymore

I wait

As

Weeks
Months
Years

Turn into

Forever

It's
Cold
Here






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  • Suzanne Dia
    November 16, 2007

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    Might want to fix that last 'its' should be it's ..it is cold here, yeah?

    I like the coolness of this, felt it to the bone. Interesting entry in the contest Good luck!