Smile onto an atomic bomb
and write your name on hand grenades
Another war worth fighting for
in the hallucination of this burning city
where the blessed die
Author notes
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A contest entry
- brevity by Melissa Gayle.
5500 points, ended November 25, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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excellent - powerful in so few words.
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mm. I loved every single one of the twenty eight words. Which I guess makes this awesome. Well done, and best of luck in the contest.
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Love the title with the rest of this, and well, your name as well, it all fits together like a neatly placed puzzle.
I'd say I have stiff competition in this contest.
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Love the title to begin with.
Does scary/beautiful make sense?
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