You set my soul free,
You make me heart beat,
you let me be me,
You help me when I'm down,
You see the good things I try to be,
You made me into everything I am,
And everything I want to be.
We had our good times,
We had our rough times,
but in the end you were still in love with me.
Youre leaving soon to serve god,
Youre going to be leaving me for two years. What am I supposed to do?
What if you dont feel the same way when you come back?
What if you meet someone else, or I do?
I dont want us to end.
I'm going to let you leave And I'll be waiting for you to come home.
You better still be in love with me. Promise me.
I'll pray for you to stay safe,
And i hope they put you in the right place.
Just dont forget about me.
I love you too much to let go so soon.
I wont forget about you now or never.
Youre going to be with me forever.
A contest entry
- This is your opportunity to write about your life by only1love4ever.
758 points, ended November 27, 2007, 19 entries
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"Youre leaving soon to serve god,
Youre going to be leaving me for two years"
Are you [or your boyfriend] by any chance Latter-day Saints?
I was just baptised yesterday and received the gift of the Holy Ghost at the sacrament meeting today. Sorry to be weird; it's just there aren't many LDS people on the site.
--Cristina -
This is a very good poem, and its very sweet.
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