Too long I have been fighting this,
You look at me and see the pain and sorrow in my eyes.
But it is not physical, it is the fear of leaving you, alone.
You come to my room, lay down beside me.
It's been so long since you've been this way towards me.
Your gentle hands begin to embrace my tired being,
bringing tears to my eyes.
Wiping them from my cheeks with sweet kisses,
whispering in my ear, asking me if it is okay.
I look at you and see your fear, and say "yes."
Ever so carefully you undress me, then yourself
revealing my body that has longed for your touch.
You place my hands on you, and I yours on me,
I hear you crying, it breaks my heart that soon I will leave you.
An hour goes by, we touch and kiss so passionately.
I tell you that I am ready, you look at me and nod.
So gently you place yourself inside of me,
I don't think it has ever felt like this before.
At first you are afraid you'll hurt me
but when I assure you that I am fine,
we begin to move like trees blowing in the wind.
One. Us. Forever.
I have so much strength with you here,
your moans are like music and I am the conductor.
With my screams you know it's about to happen,
and we explode on one another.
We lay in each others arms, breathing hard.
I have fallen in love with you all over again.
You tell me you love me more than ever,
tears filling up in your eyes.
I close mine, they don't reopen.
One last kiss, you place upon my lips.
Author notes
'The hour of departure has arrived, and we go our ways - I to die, and you to live. Which is better God only knows.' by Plato
leslielovesthomas
Option 7
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Comments
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A wonderfully penned piece of love and passion on levels few are blessed to experience. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Wow this is a really great write. Thanks for the entery and good luck in the contest!
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What option is this? Place in authors notes. Fix in 24hrs.
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The poem was very sensual & I give you many kudos for that. This is good stuff, but not as metaphor as I would have liked to see.
Never-the-less, it was a good write, I just wasn't totally inspired.
Feel free to enter another poem if you wish. :]
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Wow... the raw beauty, pain and passion brought tears to my eyes. Great write, Good luck in my contest.
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Very good. I'm leaving this comment here to remind me to come back and look at this again. Very sensual, but very classy and tasteful. Thanks for the entry.
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GREAT!
This was an interesting piece to read!Thanks for entering and good luck! -
wow nicely done! my mouth was open after i read this. you describe sex so beautifully and passionately, without making it disgusting in any way. and then i really was not expecting the ending.
beautifully done.
Abby
ps i did find a gramatical error, but its nothing major and absolutely nothing in the midst of the greatness of this poem. <33
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Nicely done. I really enjoyed this one. It was a fine write indeed. I am looking forward to reading more after this one. Thanks so much for a great read. Keep on writing.
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'The hour of departure has arrived, and we go our ways - I to die, and you to live. Which is better God only knows.' by Plato
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