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Eelingfay







isthay eelingfay increasesway eachway ayday,
ovelay isway oyjay ofway ymay earthay,
ometimessay annotcay aysay
itsway ovelay: eamdray orway ealityray,
Erhapspay away epstay orfay appinesshay
ovelay: ielay orway uthtray,

Illusionway ofway ivinglay inway away aradisepay,
otnay inway ageway
ebay oldway orway away oybay
away easay ofway oseray orway ornsthay
eryvay uchmay..orway 
eryvay ittlelay 
on'tday ebay isgracedday,
ifway orfay ovelay oneway ayday ouyay otay ycray...










Author notes

Promt: Poem in pig latin

original poem:

Feeling

this feeling increases each day,
love is joy of my heart,
sometimes cannot say
its love: dream or reality,
Perhaps a step for happiness
love: lie or truth,

Illusion of living in a paradise,
not in age
be old or a boy
a sea of rose or thorns
very much..or
very little
don't be disgraced,
if for love one day you to cry...

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  • NickelleteXninja
    December 3, 2007
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    Pig Latin....

    Very nice


  • Griswold silver member
    November 24, 2007

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    Icelynay oneday oempay. Iway inkthay itsay ethay onlyway oneway atthay isway away uleyway oeticpay iecepay. Anksthay orfay enteringway. Ottscay andway Orytay