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a monster in my mirror

i still blame myself

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  • grassisgreener
    November 22, 2007
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    dang.


  • graphite
    November 17, 2007
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    understandable.


  • misselaineous
    November 17, 2007
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    oh i know this one so well

    four words that truly hit home


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 16, 2007

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    I'm right there with you. Four words that jump straight off the screen and clutch one around the throat. Your title spells it out well also. Well done fellow poet and best wishes to you in this contest... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.

  • vertigo beat
    November 16, 2007
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    I stopped about three years ago.


  • Namita
    November 16, 2007
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    perfect.

  • Suzanne Dia
    November 16, 2007

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    shit

    (not a reflection of the work, but the reaction I had reading it ..no, i didn't shit myself)


    not sure there is a better contest out there for those 4 words.

    thank you


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