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Blessed Seductress

she turns her eyes toward the night
they sparkle they twinkle
they glisten in the moonlight
a huntress a temptress is she
an actress seductress
she chooses to be

a skinny mini
skirt blows in the breeze
she dances entrances
to please
she spins around and around and around the pole
an actress seductress
she plays the role

shes used abused
but she needs the money
so she slides glides
down the pole like honey
soft lips curved hips black lace
she's  an actress seductress
she plays her part with grace


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  • sinner-
    November 17, 2007
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    very seductive poem, enjoyed the way you placed her as a temptress yet still a victim.


  • theDARK1 gold member
    November 16, 2007

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    i see she has plenty of power in one way, but it's sad in another where she lives a life of abuse. almost like she is caught in the middle of heaven and hell, DARK.