I got a secret!
It's nothing that important
One you must promise not to tell
I must whisper it to you
So no one else will hear
I am in love with him.
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33 words
Please don't tell any one..... I love him... even though I think they know.......
A contest entry
- psst..i have a secret by Suzanne Dia.
450 points, ended November 19, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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your secret is safe with me(lol)this is well written and has that shhhhhhh sweet secret feel to it...
Blessings
Auntie Cheryl
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I like that. The way youput it on the page drew me a bit closer like i was waiting to hear what you had to say. This was very good
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lol
ahh, confessions of love
being that i don't know who HE is
well I suppose I can't go blabbing, now can I?
Thanks for entering
good luck
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