At times, thing's slow down,
thought's seem to linger,
and reality takes form.
Dark gloomy creatures crawl from darkened corner's;
too dark for the eye to see.
strange.....but all too familiar.
Family once known,
now slowly forgotten.
What happened to undying love & loyalty?
Has it been spoiled and rotten?
A contest entry
- Pimp up my quickies or snippets by leander.
400 points, ended December 4, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like the way you have stuffed the whole poem into the poem in fact, without saying too much about it
i definately enjoyed reading this one 
an oopsie in line 6: 'to familure' should be 'too familiar'
thank you for entering the contest - I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
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problem on line 6.....fixed.
Thank you for likin' the way I 'Stuff' thing's!
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