hello,
i think i know you,
small blade of grass
growing in the dirt
of my barren,
empty mind.
but you're all alone,
little green blade,
sitting by the
fallen petals
of out-of-season
flowers.
why sit there?
why don't new
blades come and join you,
and make my mind
a little less dusty?
ah,
now i remember you,
small blade of grass
you were the only growing bud
that kept me going
when i too
was all alone.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is cute and beautiful at the same time. I like how you included nature as a blade of grass that keeps you going. Lovely words..simply said, and says so much , thanks for sharing
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Aw. I love the imagery in this one. The barren mind all except for that one piece of grass.. Amazing. I like the image you planted in my mind to... Wonderful...
Great write
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wow great job, i agree with upstairs, it does really make you think. you did a really good job with this peice. imagery was pretty good 2!
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o wow! i love this, it's beautiful, and it really makes you think. nice job!
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