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A hope






Every day
I open this window
fill soul of light
wrapped by a breeze
times of memory
voices and echoes
amazements and longings
somewhere an echo
of a wish.
a hope
lighting up morning
walking for sidewalks in singings,
seeming a happy people.

a hope girl,
good perfume leaves on air.
walking in streets
to find some miracle
night had left
through dream,
for art of wanting.

Does she know?
each corner appearing,
origami of doubling
enchantment of (who knows?)

I was waiting for her.

legs today live lost,
don't even know 
eyes, poor, tired of spying
avoid to turn street,
follow straight avenue,
blind men of so much waiting.

(Hope for heart,
tired of alone love
lives in without contemplation).






Author notes

You can't find hope neither by others experiences,nor through preachings, quotes nor it sells in departmental stores.
You've to hope for 'HOPE.'

Prompt: I need hope

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  • yourbentangel
    November 19, 2007

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    I really like this one, although at times I feel it is a little antoganistic, but at times that is me. Thank you for entering and good luck