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Hands of Security

I will always keep you in my safekeeping
from the darkness that fills your soul
the clouds of despair that surround your spirit
as you try to hide from sinister feelings.

My umbrella of safeguard can be your refuge
as I embrace every moment you see those shadows
shielding you within my castle of tenderness
surrounded by my moat of love.

To see your desolation is almost more than I can bear
as I try to shield through times of sorrow
with this mantle of gentleness I caress your essence
for your worth to me is more than I can say.

Together one day the bonds will be released
but until then rest securely with me
tomorrow's dreams right now are desolate
I will never give up hope that your star will radiate.

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    November 16, 2007

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    this a brilliant and powerfully written from the prompt and is strongly penned
    well done gran and best of luck


  • Desire gold member
    November 16, 2007

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    Wonderful!!

    Love Your take on the Prompt for You bring forth much images to bring the reader there along for the ride

    Wonderful weaving of words: my umbrella of safeguard~~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Passionate Phoenix
    November 16, 2007
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    this is brilliantly written...well done and good luck xx


  • Lady Australis silver member
    November 16, 2007
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    wow this is really beautiful
    i love this one alot
    goodluck