I'VE LEARNED, JUST QUITE RECENTLY
TO STOP AND LISTEN TO ME.
I'M SMARTER THAN I THOUGHT.
GRATEFUL FOR THE ONES WHO'VE TAUGHT.
BRANCHING OUT IN NEW DIRECTIONS,
A PRETTY SCARY THING,
LOTS OF FRIENDS TO TAKE ME UNDER THEIR WING.
I REALIZE NOW HOW LUCKY I AM,
NEED TO STOP WAITING FOR THE SO-CALLED BIG "KA-BLAM".
TRYING TO STOP MY NEGATIVITY,
AND FEEL FREE JUST TO BE ME.
A GREAT BUT SCARY FEELING
MAKES ME THINK MAYBE I SHOULD BE KNEELING.
THANKING GOD OR MY HIGHER POWER,
FOR EACH AND EVERY HOUR.
THANKS!
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Welcome To AllPoetry
I agree that the caps make it seem like screaming. Capitals can be more effective if used in specific places for emphasis. Keep on writing. It is a good way to vent emotion, or even learn more about ourselves. AP is pleased to have you here and we all hope that you enjoy the site. If you have any questions, the Greeter team is here to assist you.
JeannieD
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I think putting it in all caps, makes me feel like you're trying to scream this down my throat. Slightly jacked, and the rhymeing seems a little forced at times. Other than that, I think the message was alright. Keep writing, good luck and welcome to AP
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