strangely slow
and slightly amiss...
the frantic romantic,
the could've been kiss.
the hesitant wonder
of the wannabe lover
and the sad extasy
of the chance he missed.
Author notes
hearts break before minds
A contest entry
- Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling ALL Hopeless Romantics Come on in and show me what you've got! by PureRomance.
525 points, ended November 23, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shards of Memories by PersuingHappyness.
300 points, ended November 24, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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sooo....as great as a poem this is... and sadly this week how it has been I really feel like this was written for me... the prompt said 10 lines... if this is fixed please message me... then I will re-judge it.
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This is truly a beautiful poem. I love the words you chose for it. It fits so perfectly together. God bless you in everything you write and do, and good luck to you and your poem in my contest and the others that you have it in. Please feel free to add me as a fav, as I would gladly reciplicate the same so therefor I may be blessed with being able to read more from you while this contest of mine progresses.
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thank you for entering. success in the contest.
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