Can anyone hear me,
I'm screaming you see.
Are you listening,
come rescue me.
The tears won't stop falling,
Can't you hear me calling?
Deeper and deeper the staircase is flowing,
I continue to step, not knowing where I'm going.
The walls closing in, light shutting down.
In these strange thoughts, my mind has drowned.
Surrounded by life, yet alone's how I feel.
I pray to awake, none of this was real.
A hole in my soul, begging to be filled,
someone hold me, my spirit has been killed.
No one can hear me, is that what you said?
With screaming so loud?
Oh...
they turned away instead.
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PAIN....AP name...parntsoftwins
A contest entry
- "i know right now life might not seem beautiful but it is....beautiful, damaged and deranged, scuffed up, but not broken, can't be, won't be will not be broken beautiful"~ (my lil K) by Desired-Lucidity.
700 points, ended December 3, 2007, 13 entries
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Sorry for the delay in judging; and thank you for taking the time to enter. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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very cool i can actually see it a girl/guy alone in an old stair well crying out for someone to find them for someone to care. wonderful!!!!!!
Goodluck!
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No one can hear me, is that what you said?
With screaming so loud?
Oh, they turned away instead.
I can understand the scenario of this life here unraveled..you did a great poem here revealing the story of your heart touching the depth of the life here...The concept is made very clear through the poetic depth here bringing a kind of the depth of this subject..a great poem indeeed...This was very emtional and very powerful. I loved it. It was very sad but a very real experience. -
oh hun
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Awesome write!Deep.
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Thank you very much for the comment. This was just a moment of desperation needing someone to listen when no one was there. It helped to get it out.
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