guacamole
hits the ceiling-
touchdown
Author notes
they do football on thanksgiving, do they not?
A contest entry
- Thanksgiving-ku by azure85.
600 points, ended November 24, 2007, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so my family. We're all freakin crazy.
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Very, very clever!
My wife appreciates this more than I do!
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excitement
guacamole
hits the ceiling-
touchdown
lol, very funny. i see someone getting very ecited here about the games boys play.
i like the structure you have employed here and the crispness of the compact images.
nicely done,
myron. -
guacamole
hits the ceiling-
touchdown
Yes, they sure do the football thing on Thanksgiving! A great haiku, full of the fun of the game, with some great fan antics. Thank you so much!
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Visual and visceral--and a true image of too many Thanksgivings, I think.
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I love this!
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