Everytime i feel the pain i cut a little scar
And now the things youve said to me have pushed me too damn far
And now the cut wont heal itself the blood wont go away
I cut too deep just like you the things you said today
You said you cared you said you loved you said that its just me
You said that im too fucking quiet but why cant you just see
I try to talk but you dont hear the words just wont come out
So i just sit in silence and watch you walk about
You said that if id just just talk then everythingd be fine
But you have no clue you dont know when i try to speak my mind
I try to talk but you dont listen you just turn me down
And now im sitting here today the blood drips on the ground
You say that its just me you say im in the wrong
But you wont know the truth until its all fucking gone
Maybe if wed both work harder maybe if wed try
Maybe then id stop the scars maybe i wont die
Author notes
this is an old one.. i wrote it about 3 years ago and just found it last night lol..
A contest entry
- be dark and emotinal by darkangel-darksoul.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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i love this. this is very well written and flows well. thisis so emotion and dark. It is what im looking for. thanks for your entry. good luck
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i love this poem it's everthing that I've went through. i love this poem and i love you for speaking your mind. he might not listen but all of us on here are hearing what you have to say.
yr girl, kaia! -
completely raw. i can feel this one.
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